Dear oceaner's!

If you would correct my grammatycally and other mistaces i will be vary happy and give you a bottle of beer by the possybility

Thanks!

First of all, my parents are both Engineers. My Dad has shown me once upon a time the big Factory, where he worked and I was as a child very impressed. Since this moment my big dream was to be an Engineer. It was a Factory in St-Petersburg, which has produced the articles from rubber and plastic.
Naturally, some years later, I had started the study for material and especially plastic technology. I’m sure, it was a best decision of my life.

Engineers belong to the greatest profession in the world, responsible for almost everything that makes life worth living - from leisure activities to medical treatment mobile communications to modern transport systems. Demand for good engineers is high, in practically every country in the world.
Lust, but not least, the Engineers are the top money-makers of the high education people. It makes the life of Engineers not much luckier, but quite comfortable.

The most great desire of me at Time, to speak the English language, because it’s the way of international communication today.

Ненужна тепе граматика Пей пива, пива пей )))

despergator пишет:

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Ненужна тепе граматика Пей пива, пива пей )))

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та я ужо две вина всосал, а храматикой буржуйской не овладел ))

Совершенно не претендую на звание знатока и великого грамотея, чисто интуитивно я бы лучше написала:

... and as a child I was very impressed
... it was the best decision of my life

вроде довольно неплохо. )

kljukva пишет:

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Совершенно не претендую на звание знатока и великого грамотея, чисто интуитивно я бы лучше написала:

... and as a child I was very impressed
... it was the best decision of my life

вроде довольно неплохо. )

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Thank you very much! I've given the summary to my teacher at morning. I hope, she 'll find it so acceptable like you ))

_OTMOPO3KO_ пишет:

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First of all, my parents are both Engineers. My Dad has shown me once upon a time the big Factory, where he worked and I was as a child very impressed. Since this moment my big dream was to be an Engineer. It was a Factory in St-Petersburg, which has produced the articles from rubber and plastic.
Naturally, some years later, I had started the study for material and especially plastic technology. I’m sure, it was a best decision of my life.

Engineers belong to the greatest profession in the world, res ...

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Вообще-то по-моему в английском, в отличии от немецкого, имена существительные не пишутся с большой буквы. Поэтому следует писать "factory" или "engineer" .
Удачи.

Dr_Grin пишет:

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Вообще-то по-моему в английском, в отличии от немецкого, имена существительные не пишутся с большой буквы. Поэтому следует писать "фацторы" или "енгинеер" .
Удачи.

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А ок, спасибо. Меня чисто грамматика интересует в данный момент.

_OTMOPO3KO_ пишет:

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First of all, my parents are both Engineers. My Dad has shown me once upon a time the big Factory, where he worked and I was as a child very impressed. Since this moment my big dream was to be an Engineer. It was a Factory in St-Petersburg, which has produced the articles from rubber and plastic.
Naturally, some years later, I had started the study for material and especially plastic technology. I’m sure, it was a best decision of my life.

Engineers belong to the greatest profession in the world, responsible for almost everything that makes life worth living - from leisure activities to medical treatment mobile communications to modern transport systems. Demand for good engineers is high, in practically every country in the world.
Lust, but not least, the Engineers are the top money-makers of the high education people. It makes the life of Engineers not much luckier, but quite comfortable.

The most great desire of me at Time, to speak the English language, because it’s the way of international communication today."

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First of all, both of my parents are engineers. Once upon a time, my Dad took me to a big factory, where he worked, and I, as a child, was very impressed. Ever since, my biggest dream was to become an engineer. It had been a factory in St Petersburg, which produced articles out of rubber and plastic. Naturally, because of that, some years after, I started the studies which concentrated on material and especially on plastic technology. I'm sure that it was the best decision of my life.

Engineers belong to the best profession in the world, being responsible for almost everything that makes life worth living - reaching from leasure activities to medical treatment and from mobile communications to modern transport systems. In practically each country in the world, the demand for good engineers is high. Last, but not least, engineers earn the most among those with higher education. While it doesn't make life of engineers much luckier, it makes it much more comfortable. The greatest desire of all times for me was to speak the English language because it's the way of international communication nowadays.


Вот я тут подправил малость. С правописанием у тебя в всё в порядке, проблемы имеются с порядком слов в предложении а также с некоторыми оборотами, свойственными американцам/англичанам. Если будут вопросы по поводу правки, спрашивай.

Dr_Grin пишет:

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Фирст оф алл, ботх оф мы парентс аре енгинеерс. Онце упон а тиме, мы Дад тоок ме то а биг фацторы, вхере хе воркед, анд И, ас а чилд, вас веры импрессед. Евер синце, мы биггест дреам вас то бецоме ...

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Оооо! Звучит, конечно более по английски, спасибо!

Блин, где ты был позaвчера, я уже отдал свою писанину

_OTMOPO3KO_ пишет:

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Оооо! Звучит, конечно более по английски, спасибо!

Блин, где ты был позaвчера, я уже отдал свою писанину

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Ну в следующий раз возможно успею. Если что выкладывай тут, не я так кто-нибудь другой поможет.

Dr_Grin пишет:

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Ну в следующий раз возможно успею. Если что выкладывай тут, не я так кто-нибудь другой поможет.

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Благодарю

_OTMOPO3KO_ пишет:

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Благодарю

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No problem).